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Black and White by ~deniall:icondeniall:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


Though black and white meet often as foe,
lines drawn and banners flown,
betwixt they not mention they are both part of one
that twine beneath skins of different but alike.

Ambition their tools but not their saviour,
their only hope their burning passion of squares on a board.
Potential only a thought until put forth

they are what we make of them.
©2006-2009 ~deniall
:icondeniall:

Author's Comments

This was inspired by firestreaks poem Xd

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~distressed-teen Jul 13, 2006, 2:10:19 PM
too short, i think, but im not one for criticizing people's writing, poetry comes from the heart and if that was what you came up with, then that's what you have, so yah, i think you should work on it some more tho, give it more length

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:iconfirestreak:
~firestreak Jul 14, 2006, 8:30:04 AM
it was just a reply to my poem

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why do i continue to keep you ata a distance from me?
To protect you from me
:iconfirestreak:
~firestreak Jul 14, 2006, 8:31:27 AM
inspired by?!

maybe when i write something good, this is better than mine.

your portrayel of what i wanted to say is far superior to the attempt i made.

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why do i continue to keep you ata a distance from me?
To protect you from me
:icondeniall:
~deniall Jul 14, 2006, 3:16:16 PM
lol no it's not stop putting yours down it is great! And thanks I'm glad you like it!

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all these things we think we are, are only a drop on a pond tops depths and we watch the ripples as we decide what to be....
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~Shrouded-in-Mist Jul 21, 2006, 11:26:33 PM
short and sweet very nice work

Matt

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~MidnightShadow83 Dec 26, 2006, 5:51:44 PM
It's really good. Yin and Yang. The eternal balance. That's what it brought to mind as I read it. I guess I need to go and read the inspiration piece now. As always, I love your words.

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They can take my voice when they pry it from my cold, dead throat.

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